After reading through both Jenna and llya's descriptions and about me statements, I have began to think about what I should improve upon in my own. I tweaked my about me statement last week as we explored various blogs, because a powerful description and about me statement is what keeps your blog intriguing. My creativity is what I am aiming to expand here, and I plan to find a way to do things differently from everyone else (re my blog), which will (hopefully) make my blog stand out among the others.
While searching through the blogs of many of my classmates, I feel that a lot of the enthusiast blogs could be a bit more personal. It is easy to tell who in the class is taking things seriously and who isn't putting in the effort.
All in all, I have learned quite a bit from conducting this peer review, and over the next few days, I plan to go through my description and about me to clear up any vague sections of my writing. The Picture I chose for my profile is my dog Angel, and I chose it because of it's relative nature to my blog. If you read through my Enthusiast blog, you would see how the photo does in fact add quite a bit of personality to my blog, given the strong relationship the two of us have.
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